September
9
All About Me
My name is Chloe Williams. I love Pokemon and Minecraft I built Stampy Cat. I like this channel on Youtube they’re called VenturianTale. I love going to my Aunt’s house because she has two dogs their names are May Jean and Maggie. I have a dog her name is Lucy she’s a Chiweenie. I have three cats there silly. I live by a woods where my cats like to go.I love the song Die In A Fire.
I want to know the first time you heard die in the fire, and who was the charater.
On May 23,2015 and the charater was the purple guy.
I like how you kept it short but you forgot a lot of things and missed spelled some to. When saying more than one person’s name it’s their, also you forgot to put a period in some of your sentences. I think it might be good to go over this and re-do it. You may look at my blog and tell me what you think because I am open to opinions for corrections on my blog. ashamae.edublogs.org